N'anima the Lost Soul

EDIT:

Please delete.

Well most of this seems solid apart from the race and the history which to be frank seem very unbelieveable, I will not pass judgement until Es and Kageo look over this.

I'll edit it anyhow. I felt it was rather different and unplanned.

Armagus have no soul. Nox Nyctores technically have one as they are essentially parts of the Black Beast bound into a weapon, but Armagus are machines, simple as that. Magical machines, but machines. So, the sheet falls apart instantly.

Edited.

Okay, where to start:

1.The fighting style of the Jedi is not a real style. Its movie magic. Plus, doing those moves with anything but lightsabers is near impossible, as per personal experience.

2. The character is as bland and generic as possible. How many quiet, antisocial killers who dont talk to people have you seen in Anime lately? A whole fricking lot.

3. Using just one scythe in battle is already a very hard task given that the weapon isnt designed for that and the blade geometry doesnt make it an effective cutting tool against humans. Two of them is not going to happen unless youre General Grievous. Also first you say theyre sickles, the you say theyre scythes. Are they Kamas or do you just confuse something here?

Theres more to this but i dont have the time just now. Bottom line, i disapprove.

Apps 0

Diss 1

Does this mean I have to make a new, revised one?

or does that mean I can't apply anymore?

EDIT:

Wait, WHAT? by fighting style of Jedi, I don't mean having all force-y and stuff!
You see how they move when fighting by their lightsabers only? That's what I meant <_< It's based off from real moves from different martial arts (I know cause I've seen it from the movies and from some martial artists).

2nd EDIT:

You know what, nevermind.