Aidan Blaze

Name:Aidan Blaze

Gender:Male

Age:17

Race:Beastkin(Dragon)

Family:Auron Blaze/Pyron (Father), Aria Blaze (Mother)

Appearance:
Body Type:Slim/Well Built
Skin C:Tan
Height:5"10
Weight:156lbs
Hair C:Crimson Red
Eye C:Amber


Attire:Aidan wears a basic outfit that he ventures in. First is his black and red long-sleeve jacket that cuts off at the abbs and sleeves that cut off just before the wrist. The jacket also has three of the same symbols in red one on each shoulder and one on his back. Next are his gloves a pair of black fingerless gloves that cut off at the joint of his fingers and cuff at his wrist with a black and red circle on the back of them. Then there are his black hakama like pants that cut off in the middle of his calf muscles, and finally a pair of black combat boots.

Loyalty:Friends/Allies

Alignment:Chaotic Good

Occupation:Hero

Personality:Aidan is very persistent he is not the type of person to give up no matter the circumstances he'll just keep trying until he succeeds. He's got a kind of determination that keeps him going. He's also protective of others it is His nature to help people, he would die protecting a total stranger. In truth he just doesn't like people getting hurt when he has the power to stop it. His loyalty is his most notable trait of them all. Once Aidan trust you his loyalty towards you is unflinching. He's willing to go the distances for you and you alone. All his traits aren't so good though Aidan is unbelievably impulsive he never ask questions first, he's more of an action taking guy. This is mostly due to his impatient nature. He doesn't believe in the phrase patience is a virtue because he doesn't like to wait for anything, he likes whatever then and there not later. Another bad trait of his is his arrogance he believes himself to already be a hero of immense power like the six heroes of legend, but this is far from true. Last but not least Aidan has a very explosive temper for reasons unknown to even him, but if you piss him off stay out of his way. His anger fuels his pyrokinetic abilities, the angrier he is the stronger his abilities  get.



Weaponry:Hono-Ken (Blaze Fist) limiter/Ars Magus
At first the Hono-Ken's primary function was to limit/reduce Aidan's crimson flames so that he would gradually begin to learn how to control them, then it's real function would activate when he had mastered his flames to a certain extent. Aidan's father did this knowing that he would need both a limiter so that his power wouldn't consume him and because he knew once he began his path toward being a hero that others would have Ars Magus or Nox Nyctores and he would need one of his own if he was to stand a chance against them.

Abilities: Being half human half dragon he has many dragonic like abilities though he does not possess all the abilities of a dragon. First there is his super enhanced condition this ability was something that came naturally to him almost like breathing. This ability enhanced all physical attributes including strength, speed, reflexes, agility, stamina, and all five senses. Next there is his regeneration ability that allows him to recover from most all wounds and afflictions instantly unless the weapon or person that inflicted the wound power is greater than his. Another ability he possess is hid semi-immortality or decelerated aging ability that will keep him alive long after any regular persons expiration date. Next is his dragonic form which gives him almost dragon scales for skin, claws and fangs stronger and sharper than steel and it also give him a prehensile dragon tail which he can control perfectly. This ability however is not unlimited or without flaw using this ability takes almost everything out of him and leaves him pretty much defenseless, so he only uses this in win or die situations. The ability can only be done once every couple of months because it is done using power that has been reserved over a long course of time. Next is his second most powerful ability which is the ability to manifest and manipulate Crimson Flames that is as powerful as many hihg ranking offensive spells. The sheer power of this ability is so strong that it can destroy most Things. This is why he wears the Hono-Ken to reduce/supress the power in order to keep his power under control. He utilizes this ability regularly while in combat which is what makes him such a fierce opponent. His last ability which is immunity to fire/heat due to his dragon like physiology.

History:Aidan was born to a noble woman known as Aria because of her status Aria was use to special treatment and loads of attention, but when Aidan was born she sought a much simpler life. She left home venturing far away, finally settling in a small village. Growing up Aidan's mother told him many stories of there world about The Black Beast,  The Dark War, The Legendary Six Heroes, and his favorite story about the single hero whose effort sent the beast into a dormant like state giving the rest of the world a fighting chance. Listening to these tales filled his head with ideas of grandeur. Aidan often daydreamed that he was a hero fighting the black beast,and leading the other six heroes into battle. He played with all the children in the village pretending to be the king of heroes if ever such a thing existed. Aidan decided that one day this fantasy he clung to would become a reality. Aria could tell that there was something special about him just by looking into his golden eyes. She. Truly felt that he was meant for unimaginably great things. As times progressed Aria began to notice just how Special Aidan really was he start exhibiting amazing abilities such as incredible strength and speed along  with an acute sense of smell and hearing and the ability of sight in the dark. Other people started noticing this as well. Most people came to the same conclusion Aidan was a Beastkin. Aria didn't know what to think she had not known Aidan's father for long and shortly after Aidan's birth he had disappeared without a trace. Aria thought of him as a truly worthless man. There some villagers who began treating Aria and Aidan differently, but for the most part everyone who was there friends remained so. It was Aidan's 10th birthday that more mystery was added to Aidan's already cryptic origins. Mostly all villagers and there children were in attendance even though there were rumors of Seither beast that had been plaguing the area lately. They joked, laughed, and told stories of Aidan in his past years and all the trouble he got into. Just as they were about to sing happy birthday it happened. There was screeching howl in the distance that was getting closer and closer to the village. The villagers grabbed there children and scurried for shelter. The village guards surrounded the village setting up a perimeter though since none of these humans had any real power the seither beast would tare there defense apart a fact these men were well aware of. Tension began to build as they waited for the inevitable to happen, and just as dead silence filled the air it happened. Their claws tore through them like a sword through flesh,  and they continued toward the village. Pretty soon they reached it and began their feeding frenzy. The screams could be heard all throughout the village. Aidan couldn't take it any more as they hid in the underground cellar under their house (waiting like lambs that had been brought to the slaughter) as their friends and fellow villagers died.His mother tried holding him which was a valiant but stupid effort. He got up and ran out of their cellar through the house and witnessed the terrible truth. The streets were running red with the blood, dead bodies were all over the village, and their were a whole lot more seither beast out their than what he originally expected. They resembled wolves how they were all sniffing, and the way they arrived in such a large pack, and were sniffing all around as if they were searching for something. At that moment they all simultaneously turned their attention towards Aidan and began making their way toward him. He realized this and decided that it was now or never for him. He put his hands up and entered the fighting stance of any typical inexperienced fighter. He drew back with his right and sent it forward full force. It was a moment of epic proportion as Aidan's fist connected with the beast and sent it flying. He continued throwing punches, but having never done this before he was eventually brought down after hitting two or three more and they dissipating. Aidan thought this was sure it was over for him, at least he stood and fought. Even though he never got to be a hero he was content with this, but once again he heard the screams of his friends. What the hell was he talking about acting all noble because he had taken a few of those beast down, he at least needed to kill as many of them as they had of his fellow villagers. There were still people alive that needed to be protected, hell his mother was still alive. It couldn't end like this. Better yet he wouldn't let it end like this not in a hundred years or ever. His blood began to boil, his wounds began to heal, his fighting spirit was at an all time high. A pillar of crimson flames shot up from Aidan's very core instantly getting rid of the beast surrounding him. He made his way through the village turning the beasts into nothing with his flames. After it was all over the crimson aura surrounding him dissipated and the villagers began the clean up process giving everyone who died a proper burial. Aidan became the self proclaimed protector of the village, and before he set out he was able to protect the village like that another three or four times, but ultimately he realized he had to leave, as time progressed and Aidan got older his flames escaped his control more and more. After three long years of keeping his village safe for now he was the one endangering it. He left in the dead of night while everyone was supposed to be sleeping. When he reached the city limits the village leader was waiting there for him. "Do you really intend to leave" he pondered. "Yes I must" Aidan replied. "I figured this day would come, just not so soon" said the village leader. " though you are not leaving for that reason alone, though you do need to gain control of those crimson flames of yours" the man said already knowing the reason for his depart. "Then what is my reason" asked Aidan. " You were not meant to spend the entirety of your life here protecting a single village. I always knew you would go on to do great things and protect many" the village leader said in response to Aidan. "You also have questions about your origins, that being said I will now help you by betraying Aria". "What do you mean by betraying my mother". "Aria never wanted you to hear the name I'm about to tell you, because she feared that if you were ever to meet this man that you might become like him, but I know that is not true you're the type of person that forges their own path. Now Aidan hear me that man's name is AURON BLAZE. Seek him out and I'm sure you'll find all your answers and then some" with that final piece of advice Aidan was off. He ventured all throughout  the land first searching the other villagers not knowing his mother was originally from the Hierarchal Cities. He eventually made his way to the cities though with the money earned from small jobs he did for people on the way he bought a new pair of clothes that were modern and fit in, in the city. He eventually got a hit off the name sending to a forging shop where a pair of limiters in the shape of gloves were waiting for him. The forger sent him to a hermit that stayed in the forest, but this wasn't any old ordinary hermit. He was a former master of martial arts he taught Aidan a few styles together along with how to incorporate his crimson ability  into his unique fighting style. Having finally mastered his ability to a certain extent his limiters transformed into a pair of gauntlets named the Hono-Ken. He was surprised that they held such an ability and wondered what other secrets he might uncover on his journey. His training with the hermit lasted for three years. The results of his training really showed in him all his physical attributes had been taken to new heights as well as his five senses. You see he didn't just teach Aidan the way of the fist but also the way of survival in all types of conditions. Aidan was sent to one final place, academy city where he would join the and soon after become a member of NOL. Within a year Aidan had done exactly that, but in the end he realized why his father sent him to such a place. It was not to join but to observe the events that would unfold within the organization. Aidan had seen NOL's true colors. They were not the heroic military that some people made them out to be they were in fact what true evil looked liked. Realizing this Aidan dropped out of the Academy and decided to stop searching for his father realizing that he was never meant to find him. Instead his father had set up many trials for him, so that in the end Aidan would stand on his own two feet stop chasing the name Auron Blaze, stop searching for answers to the past, look to the future, and begin to walk his own path. The path that would make Aidan a true hero.

Okay, first of, welcome to the forum and thank you for signing up, i hope you have a nice time here!

Secondly, while the whole thing looks solid and i could see it happening, there are some flaws i´d like to adress. I know its in a work in progress state, but there are some things already that would make the sheet a disapproved one.

1: Dragonkin. A: You mean beastkin, or humanlike, since thats the official term.
B: I´d like some explaination if thats supposed to be an actual mythical creature, like Dragons in Skyrim for instance or an evolved reptile like the seithrbeasts you´ve included in your history.
The former i won´t approve because never has there been any mention of anything like this existing in Blazblue or XBlaze.

2: The completely helpless village. Living in the wilderness kind of requires you to be able to defend yourself from said wilderness. How the hell was no one able to fight back if they made a fricking village in that place? There should be lots of beasts around they have to defend themselves from.

3: The military acadamy is not arkham asylum, i don´t think people ever saw it in any bad light.

4: His powers. Making everyone burst into flames in a fit of rage is NOT a well balanced character and will not be approved, because you can´t defend yourself against that. Try to come up with a better power here, please.

Everything else seems fine by me.

Okay are you saying you want evidence of the dragonkin and that you will not allow the warg? And his flame abilities are not gonna be capable of instantaneously setting people ablaze once he has the Hono-Ken gloves that are limiters they reduce the power of his flames by 75%. Ill probably redo the rest of the history for, and is it absolutely necessary that I change the race from what I have since you know what I'm talking about

Not really evidence, just a clarification if you mean real dragons or, for instance, reptiles that evolved through seithr, radiation and climate change.

What if he loses the Hono-ken or they´re destroyed? Thats a real possibilty in combat.

And no, its not necessary that you change the race, but you should probably write something like "Beastkin (dragon)" or something, just to calm the other mods down.

Bump

Not a Nox Nyctores. Why would Nine build something like that? No one but Aiden would have use for it, so shed have no reason to make it. Not to mention Noxes are extremely rare.. So much so that only ten are known to the public.

Ill review in further detail later.

EDIT:
Right, a full review.
First section is okay. The name is a bit odd, considering his last name is part of the franchises name, but its fine, doesn´t contradict anything. His outfit very much reminds me of young Ragna´s training outfit.
Chaotic good allignment... is interesting, if you can stick to that. Hero isn´t really an occupation, but i`ll let that slide.

Personality... oh boy. He´s Vash the Stampede, but instead of laid back and lazy he´s agressive and active. To be honest, it sounds a little too clishee to be true. It sounds too perfect to me. But aside from adding a few flaws to him (Which every person has, even Hakumen) its not a gamebreaking thing.

The weapon is where my main complaint lies. As i said, Nox Nyctores`s are extremely rare. Not to mention made by Nine, or Relius Clover- by nobody else. Some guy, even if he`s a dragon, wouldn´t be able to do it, and if he`d try, he would -KILL- lots of people trying to get it to work. That happens even when it does work- you need living souls to create a Nox, which incidentally kills people.
In addition to that, Nox class weapons drive their users insane unless they`re extremely resiliant, such as Hakumen, Jubei and Terumi. Jin is the prime example of that- he wasn`t trained how to use his Nox, went insane and killed lots of people as a result.
If you make it an Armagus, i could deal with it. Even a mechanical thing would work. Make it a grimiore that limits his power- that works for me. But there`s a reason why there´s only 10 (technically 12) Nox Nyctoreses out there- people die when you make them.

Abilities- basically he`s a dragon werewolf and can change into dragon form. Okay with me. Even the semi immortality thing flies with me- we`ve got some of those here, Nu, Ragna, Terumi to say a few.
That dragon fire can destroy "most anything" is doubtful, seeing how most dragons i know from fiction burn down castles, but the walls of the castle remain standing. They don´t melt from the fire or anything... meaning it doesn´t destroy anything, its just a really hot fire.
Finally, there´s a little complaint- what dragon walks around in midair? They fly, ususally, they don´t walk around on thin air. You didn´t give us an explaination why he can just walk around unsupported in midair... why does he have that ability? The thing with his glove- see above. If its an Armagus, its fine with me.

History- Aria, the witch from Diablo? lol. ....wait. Aidan is the name of the Dark Wanderer, and Aria was his mother... so, your OC is the Dark Wanderer, Diablo in human form? To tell you the truth, the abilities seem very similar.

The rest is okay for me. I like how you changed the history to a better degree, shows that you listen to advice- sadly a rare trait among RPers. I especially like the last part, where he realizes that he was never meant to find his father.
Anyway, if you turn the Nox into an Armagus and fix the things i said about the abilities, maybe a few flaws for his personality since nobody shines as bright as this... probably not even Caelica, Blazblue´s Jesus- if you fix those things, its an approval from me.

I´ll let Kageo or Lambda have a word, next.

He's not perfect he has good and bad traits all of which work into his Chaotic Good type alignment

Did you edit everything else then?

Yes I changed the nox nyctores to ars magus, I changed his ability to destroy most anything to some of the most durable things known to man and took a way his sky walking ability

'Well, if you say he´s got his flaws- i`ll give you the benefit of the doubt and say yes, that is approved by me.

You`ve got 1 approvals, and zero disapprovals- be aware that you need two approvals to start playing.

Okay thanks

Can I get a second mods opinion

To be honest this has a lot of flaws but as Haruka said, no character is perfect so I will approve also.

Apps: 2

Diss: 0