Esotera Argus Villem (WIP)

Name: Esotera Argus Villem.

Gender: Female.

Age: 25 years old.

Race: Human.

Appearance: What looks like a witch, quacks like a witch, and walks like a witch, is definitely a witch, or perhaps not. It would be true if Esotera was not a witch, but alas, she is one. Her manner of appearance and attire reflects her nature as one, with silver hair reflected with bangs crossed and knotted in front, the length of her hair let loose behind as it extends to the same level length as her shoulder. It is wild and disheveled but disparate in that regard. Her skin is milky as her eyes violet. Her face is serene and otherwise neutral when beholden from afar and given not a reason to contort her expressions to reflect her mood.

For what veiled deception lay underneath her figure obscuring robes are a well defined contour of curves, with supple and generously well endowed bust that genetics had seen fit to give her, as she stands well formed as a specimen to see... but she exposes herself not to the masses for plebeians are not worthy of her form, like an agnostic and secular prude that she is. Also stands 5' 10" feet.

Clothing of choice: She wears a witch hat, though left without decorations at first, over time, began to see many adornments hung about it which are otherwise aesthetic in taste. Likewise the same can be said of her outfit, which is a robe that extends down to her shin. She wears boots underneath with rubbery footwear, and stocking that otherwise is unseen. The sleeves extends down to her elbow, quite loose enough to fit five shoes inside, but it is tightened to prevent such a thing. Also has several straps all around her clothing that are otherwise useless. Wears a neck collar, and a miniature cape which encompasses her shoulder, naval and back, locked in place by several straps as well. Likewise her clothing are merely zipped up and tightened by a belt, hung by a shoulder strap as it is stretchable. Made for witches of all size and folds. It obscures her figure, and it is quite modest so to say, also fulfills the purpose quite admirably as having as many pockets as possible to store whatever she needs, preferably books, on her person, among other things. Tends to wear a satchel on her person.

Loyalty: The ideals of the Mage's Guild, and more importantly the Guild itself.

Occupation: Sorceress/Civilian.

Personality: Brilliance and madness are two sides of the same coin, as she has been given a most astute mind possessing an understanding of the inner working of magic that qualified her for the field, that sadly she also possessed darker tastes in the form of merely burning things in pyromania. A result of an inferiority complex spurred about in a result to prove, that perhaps can be summarized by chemical imbalances in her neural cognitive ability than anything else. Or perhaps as a result of the fact that she harbors darker inhibitions by what a prudish school that she went to will never allow such a thing of that practice, hence her fascination with what is forbidden otherwise, or merely socially unacceptable. Finding solace and peace in that which is fire, which is to say her passion.

Nonetheless, in spite of her darker inhibitions, Esotera is a prude like her school, the values are reflected in her as a witch, with some fascination with mysteries of the mystical realms traversed not, that otherwise scholarly pursuits can be applied, combined with a degree of wanderlust. Her appetite for exploration whet by what was taught and given as the great many witches and wizards before had achieved, that perhaps she can measure up, if not by any measure of imagination is merely a lofty aspiration among many others brought about in time. Delusions of greatness and grandeur are about, as she wants to leave her legacy so people would remember her, that perhaps is a result of her inferiority complex which is unexplained in origin, but most likely genetic.

Tends to be self-serving to hide her insecurities, as well as bold in place of fear of failure. To fall into the abyss she loathes most to not dwell near or even within, as she holds harbors these feelings to herself only, letting naught but her own as audience to her own inner demons. Something she aims to rid of one day as she feels the need to perhaps one day, destroy these dark skeletons in her closet festering within, to quest not to truly make her mark as much as fight against the human condition.

That, and she tends to try to be sardonic at life, in her outlook of things. It's not so much as what she can do for the world, as much as what the world can do for her in regards to her relations, for self-gratification.

Weaponry: Her only weapon at hand is a staff, which has stubs at the clubbed top which is fat and bulgy, said stubs are metallic and can hurt like Hell if used to thwack people. Nothing out of the ordinary with it. Made out of wood, with several strings around it and ornamentation Esotera seems to be infatuated with.

Abilities: As a passion type magus, Esotera harbors specialty in the destructive crafts of the school of fire. She harbors capability to conjure fire into being, that which she has immunity to, but the same could not be said of any other fire born not of her hands or whatever medium she procures it from. Be it hot or cold, concentrated or wild, these are not beyond her capabilities, with the additional ability of delaying the fire to imbue such things with the sigil of fire. A circle marked with a flame icon, best recognized as a red sigil, or the firemark, that which can be detonated proportional to the object it inhabits, distinct and not connected to Earth or more accurately the ground, for that is the domain of the world, which she has no access to. Fire derives itself at the expense of others, and clashes against Earth as a philosophy. Likewise, it suffers weakness to water, naturally as fire. Distinguishable in that it is grey, the fire can be recognized easily as a result.

She is well versed in magical terminologies, and many mystic elements that comes with it, with the added benefit of being able to speak Italian as per her heritage passed down.

History:

Well alright have had a good night's rest before I am judging this sheet. I find the story much more realistic than the last version of it, the weapons seem to suit her and not to be too out of the ordinary. While one must always take the approach of the use of magic very carefully, I imagine from what I've seen that you would likely not abuse the use of magic. After all it can be pretty powerful within its right. But since you've kept it to only a few area as opposed to an arc wide range of many spells I don't see much of a problem here.

She seems like she might be an interesting addition, I'm willing to be game here and want to give it a shot so.

"App: 01"
"Diss: 00"

Well... the things i pointed out were fixed, so yeah, i can approve this.

Apps 2

Diss 0

Hold on a sec. There are many things that have been gotten wrong with this character, and a plot hole so blatant it's a wonder why you two approved it.

First, mages pure-and-simple are top-tier fodder. I've been told that in the old RP, pure magic is normally a no-no, especially if you're able to throw it out like this. Other characters have Armagus for that.

Now for the plothole. It's a fact that the Mages' Guild has disbanded - or been destroyed - during the Dark War. The Black Beast is what made mincemeat of it. So how in the world would a woman in her twenty-somethings have gone there, when it has been destroyed OVER NINETY FRICKING YEARS AGO?

How much the sheet doesn't realize where it fails is that it mentions learning about Ars Magus and shit when they popped up at the end of the Dark War.

Besides, I can read some kana and the avatar happens to have a dogtag saying "Mirii"/"Miree"/however-the-shit-that's-pronounced.

This is an insult to everyone who worked their ass to get their characters approved.
Therefore not only do I disapprove, but I highly advise the creator of the character to learn a bunch more things before making another character, and the moderators to be a bit higher on alert next time such a character pops up to avoid that sort of mistake.

THAT SHEET NEEDS AN OVERHAUL.

The mages guild still exists. And i avise you to watch your language around your friends, if you want to keep them.

Bullet wrote:

The mages guild still exists.

Really? If the Mages' Guild still existed, you'd think that canon would've mentioned them aside from the existence of Nine and Trinity (and both are not the forces in presence right now). Or in supplementary materials that take place at years 2199 or something for that matter. Canon didn't even hint at the Guild being still existent.
This, and the NOL would've taken them as a serious problem given that the Mages' Guild could teach people magic, making their so-prized Armagus utterly irrelevant and unneeded.

Remix Heart did, and thats canon now. Chapter 11, two young witches of the guild meet Mai.

Actually I have another character in mind. Mind placing this sheet in the bin?