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 Es, the Embryo (WIP)

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PostSubject: Es, the Embryo (WIP)   Es, the Embryo (WIP) I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 24, 2013 2:04 pm

Name:
Es (She doesn´t posess a serial number yet as she is a pre-production model.)
Es is german and simply means "It".

Gender:
Female

Age:
5 (Biologically. In truth, she`s 155 years old.)

Race:
Prime Field Unit/Cyborg

Appearance:
Es is a young, slender girl with big breasts and pale skin, blonde hair with a large ahoge that is cut to shoulder length aside from a small braid at the back. Her hands are small and dexterous, but her frail appearance is decieving as she posesses a good deal of swordsmanship and physical strength. Presumably, she also has a tattoo on her upper chest with the Murakumo emblem. A noteworthy fact is that unlike her sucessors, Es´s speech is normal, though monotone. It lacks the tinny, metallic subtone Lambda, Nu and, to some degree, Mu have.

Clothing of choice:
Es still wears the frilly, extravagant baby blue silk dress with a corset of the same color, a white blouse and red tie that her creator made her wear originally. Underneath, she has dark blue, thigh high socks and boots with steel soles and tips. Surprisingly, the color of her panties is still unknown.

Loyalty:
Though Kokonoe occasionally bugs her around, her master and her lover are both long dead, so she serves no one.

Occupation:
In essence, Es would be qualified to be a vigilantie.

Personality:
Timid, but not shy, Es is a curious, though odd, individual. Raised in an enviroment unlike most others, she`s unfamilliar with daily life and due to living in the past, she doesn´t know many of the great advancements Ars Magus has granted Mankind as a whole. She`s not agressive or impulsive, but rather calculating and controlled, she lacks the emotional outbursts of her sucessors and rathermore thinks to herself than commiting to immense bursts of emotions. That doesn´t mean she`s incapable of emotion, in fact, she is a very caring and passionate person, though she keeps most of it to herself.

Finally, if bored or left alone, Es is a playful, sometimes silly Prime Field Unit, doing things a child would do with no bad thoughts behind it. One might call it experimentation.

Weaponry:
Es used to wield the Legacy Weapon: Vow Crystal Seal Blade Murakumo. However, as it was not inside the boundary with her, she no longer has it.

Abilities:
Es, in essence, is a Prime Field Unit and is thus capable of surviving inside the boundary, and has done so for one and a half centuries. She is capable of spartial transfer (Though to a much more restricted degree than her sucessor units) if she has the proper coordinates laid out beforehand. This does not only require GPS coordinates, but also the five different coordinates required to navigate in the boundary- Phase pattern, Shift tangent, X- Y- and Z-coordinates, boundary integrity and time... the later one being extremely important.
Finally, she is capable of hovering, has increased physical strength and through her various robotic implants has heightened senses and reflexes.

History:


As Toya`s body had been entirely corrupted by the Beasts power and Es couldn`t find any other way to protect the rest of the world from him, before he would transform entirely, she teleported herself and him into the boundary, and remained there to keep him in check.
However, as Toya was no longer human and more or less a mass of seithr, he disappeared as soon as they arrived, and Es was floating in the midst of the boundary alone. A feeling of dread came over her, and she was scared to return back to the human world. If Toya would be there, then that would probably the last thing she`d see... still, she knew of the devastating effects of the boundary on a humans mind, and so she decided that it would be for the best if she would simply close her eyes and sleep.

Time had no meaning in the boundary, and so, as she slept, mankind pryed open the door of the boundary to find the Azure- and thus made way for what used to be Toya to escape. Mankind was nearly wiped out before he could be defeated, and the effort to restore what had been lost began shortly after. Es slept through it all. The Susannoo unit and Terumi Yuuki were exiled to the boundary. Es took no notice of it. They left the boundary, and her, though as they did the scientist Kokonoe, who brought Susannoo back in the first place, noticed a living being inside the boundary- something which should be entirely impossible.
Her curiosity sparked, she brought it back- but before any sort of questions could be asked, Es teleported herself out of the laboratory and found herself lost in a world she didn`t understand.
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PostSubject: Re: Es, the Embryo (WIP)   Es, the Embryo (WIP) I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 30, 2013 9:57 am

I don't really know the character, so I'll judge impartially like I would do for an OC.
And basically, the sheet is more than okay. Though I don't know too much regarding her history and she has absolutely no weapon. I don't know if just going barehanded will work... but that's just me.
Then again, the history is nigh-empty, just saying she slept through everything. It may be true, I don't know. The fact that there's nothing before and after, though, kinda bugs me. It's like she just dropped in the face of the world, then dropped away, then just dropped back in and instantly teleported out of Kokonoe's lab while she didn't even know an exit. Though I'll easily pass on this last point.

It's not like this character could mess everything up. You have an approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Es, the Embryo (WIP)   Es, the Embryo (WIP) I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 30, 2013 10:49 am

The bio is actually incomplete but if you`d approve it now i suppose its well rounded enough. XD

But yeah, the lack of history comes from a lack of completion in the bio. Note the "WIP" in the title... work in progress.
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PostSubject: Re: Es, the Embryo (WIP)   Es, the Embryo (WIP) I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 30, 2013 3:52 pm

Well i can say I am thoroughly satisfied with the backstory, though of course as Jin mentioned, I'd prefer if she had even an armagus, maybe she can find one or construct something? Either way! I am enjoy what I've seen, its time to boot Es to the world of the living. Make an Impact as I know you can ^_^~

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Diss:00 (Yess Dick Dastardly's old number, good to see it on this end :3)
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